This is a little mini test of 25 key word transformation questions for C2 proficiency students. Most of the questions are based around fixed expressions that often come up at this level. You will find most of them in previous lesson plans I’ve made, so the test will serve as good spaced repetition for your students. Download the handout and answer key below:
2Ts in a Pod are back with a great new episode on the topic of endurance challenges. Katy and Tim talk to Mike Coppock, the long distance mountain runner, about his experiences completing the Island Munros Triathlon and setting a new record for crossing the Pyrenees mountains from the Atlantic to the Mediterranean coast.
If you want to read more about Mike’s adventures, or watch the excellent short film of the Island Munros Triathlon, follow the links below:
cutt.ly/xA5ypvm – Island Munros Triathlon & The Martin Moran Foundation
This is another training worksheet to introduce some of the expressions that typically come up in part 4 of the proficiency use of English paper. Students work together to guess the meaning of the expressions from the context, then attempt to recall them to complete version 2. Download the handout below:
The little boy was very jealous to see his cousin riding his new bike. (GREEN)
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She’s been a bit sad for the last few days. (MOUTH)
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Be optimistic, at least it isn’t raining. (BRIGHT)
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The film is very different from the book. (CRY)
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In his autobiography, he finally told the truth about the infamous argument with his manager. (RECORD)
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Listen, I’ll talk about the most important thing first, we love the house and we want to make an offer. (POINT)
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Give me updates about the progress with the order, you can call or text anytime. (POSTED)
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The England supporters said that bad luck was the reason for their team’s failure to qualify. (PUT)
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The waiters at the restaurant were extremely attentive. (COULD)
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Listen, I think we didn’t start our relationship well yesterday, can we begin again? (FOOT/START)
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The police think Julia had something to do with the robbery but I think they’re choosing the wrong course of action. (TREE)
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We can go and have a look but we can’t be sure that there will be space to park. (GUARANTEE)
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He takes great satisfaction in his ability to remember names and dates. (PRIDES)
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She’s definitely at home, I saw her briefly when she walked past the window. (CAUGHT)
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There wasn’t a single room left at the hotel. (WHATSOEVER)
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When he was most successful, he could get a table at any restaurant he wanted. (HEIGHT)
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Who knows how she’s going to react when you tell her? (TELLING)
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We need to accept the fact that the money’s gone and we can’t get it back. (FACE)
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I don’t mind going to the cinema by myself. (AVERSE)
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You’ll have to work very hard if you want to impress the boss, she’s very demanding. (SOCKS)
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I was really nervous when I met my girlfriend’s parents for the first time but they soon made me feel comfortable. (EASE)
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Listen, I’ve said what I want to say, I don’t want to discuss this matter anymore. Goodbye. (PIECE/OPEN)
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Conversation
Complete the questions, then ask and answer them with a partner.
Which member(s) of your family do you …….. the closest resemblance to?
Are you the kind of person that often feels green with …….. about your friends’ achievements or possessions? Do you think it’s normal to have these feelings? What can we do about them?
If you’re feeling …….. in the mouth, how do you cheer yourself up? Are you someone who tends to look on the bright ……..? Or do you have a more gloomy outlook on life?
Think of a place you’ve visited that was a far …….. from the place where you grew up. How was it different? Was it a good different or a bad different?
If you have to talk to someone about a difficult subject, do you tend to get ……… to the point, beat around the bush or avoid confrontation altogether? What are the pros and cons of each approach?
Think of a celebrity who has recently ……… the record straight about something they did or said in the past. What happened? Do you think they were right to speak out?
When a person becomes extremely successful or famous, how much of their success do you think can be ……… down to luck and how much is about real talent?
What’s the best customer service you’ve ever received? A place where the staff couldn’t ……… been more attentive. How did it make you feel? Does your country generally have good customer service?
Have you ever ……… off on the wrong foot with someone and had to start ………? Did you then go on to become good friends with that person?
Which of your skills/abilities do you pride yourself ………? Why do you think people tend to be overly modest or hide their best talents and abilities?
Have you ever ……… a glimpse of a really famous celebrity? Where were you? What was the celebrity doing? If you could live that moment again, would you do anything differently?
Think of an example of a famous person who is no longer at the height ……… their success. What are they doing now? Do you feel sorry for them?
Are you someone who tends to ……… up to facts when they’re staring you in the face? Or are you sometimes in denial?
“I’m not averse ……… going to the cinema by myself.” – Is this true for you? What are the pros and cons of going to see a film alone?
Did/do you work your ……… off at school or uni? Or just coast along doing the bare minimum?
How can the parents of a new girl/boyfriend ……… you at ease the first time you meet them? Have you ever been in this situation? How did it feel?
This is another training worksheet to introduce some of the expressions that typically come up in part 4 of the proficiency use of English paper. Students work together to guess the meaning of the expressions from the context, then attempt to recall them to complete version 2. Download the handout below:
Look at the expressions in bold and try to guess their meaning with a partner.
Young women are often discouraged from pursuing careers in engineering due to sexist preconceptions.
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People who earn under €10,000 a year are exempt from paying income tax.
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I am behind with my rent payments, I owe my landlord €1000.
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Whether he’s hot or not is beside the point, he’s my ex-boyfriend so you can’t date him.
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There is no question of him staying the night with us, he can get a hotel.
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New restrictions will come into force on Friday night.
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Going camping in the mountains does not appeal to me at all.
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The police ruled out the obvious suspect because he had an alibi for the night in question.
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They made the decision to get married on the spur of the moment.
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He has set his heart on going to LA to be an actor.
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When what really happened comes to light, you’re going to be in big trouble.
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I’m not nearly as good-looking as him, it’s not fair!
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It is a foregone conclusion that Man City will win the league now.
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I just took it as read that anyone who applied for the course would have the necessary qualifications.
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Sadly, he’s just not cut out to be a professional basketball player.
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I have no idea whatsoever who’s going to win this match.
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He came in for a lot of criticism after his comments to the press.
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My horse couldn’t keep pace with the rest of the riders and we soon fell behind.
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Version 2
Try to recall the expressions using the key words.
Young women are often put off pursuing careers in engineering due to sexist preconceptions. (DISCOURAGED)
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People who earn under €10,000 a year don’t have to pay income tax. (EXEMPT)
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I have missed a few of my rent payments, I owe my landlord €1000. (BEHIND)
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Whether he’s hot or not doesn’t matter, he’s my ex-boyfriend so you can’t date him. (BESIDE)
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There’s no way he is staying the night with us, he can get a hotel. (QUESTION)
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New restrictions will become law on Friday night. (FORCE)
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Going camping in the mountains does not interest me at all. (APPEAL)
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The police eliminated the obvious suspect because he had an alibi for the night in question. (RULED)
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They made the decision to get married on a whim. (SPUR)
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He is determined to go to LA to be an actor. (HEART)
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When what really happened is revealed, you’re going to be in big trouble. (LIGHT)
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He’s much better looking than me, it’s not fair! (NEARLY)
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Man City will definitely win the league now. (FOREGONE)
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I just assumed that anyone who applied for the course would have the necessary qualifications. (READ)
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Sadly, he just doesn’t have what it takes to be a professional basketball player. (CUT)
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I haven’t the foggiest idea who’s going to win this match. (WHATSOEVER)
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He received a lot of criticism after his comments to the press. (CAME)
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My horse couldn’t go at the same speed as the rest of the riders and we soon fell behind. (PACE)
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Discussion
Young women are often discouraged from pursuing careers in engineering due to sexist preconceptions.
Is this true? If so, what can be done to change the situation?
People who earn under €10,000 a year are exempt from paying income tax.
Should anyone else be exempt from paying tax? What can we do to cut down on tax avoidance?
Whether he’s hot or not is beside the point, he’s my ex-boyfriend so you can’t date him.
Is it ever ok to date a friend’s ex? Why? Why not?
New restrictions will come into force on Friday night.
What will you do if new coronavirus restrictions do come into force?
Going camping in the mountains does not appeal to me at all.
Does it appeal to you? Why? Why not?
They made the decision to get married on the spur of the moment.
Have you ever made a big decision on the spur of the moment?
He has set his heart on going to LA to be an actor.
What do you have your heart set on? What will you do to achieve it?
Sadly, he’s just not cut out to be a professional basketball player.
Do you think you’re cut out to be a professional sportsperson? Why? Why not? What skills/traits do you think you’re lacking?
He came in for a lot of criticism after his comments to the press.
Think of a celebrity who has come in for a lot of criticism recently. What did they do? Do you think the criticism was deserved? What’s your opinion of cancel culture?
This is a lesson plan for students preparing for the Cambridge main suite exams. I specifically created it with C1 or C2 students in mind but it could easily be adapted to B2. Students practice word formation while playing a game of noughts and crosses. Download the handout below:
Students play in pairs, they must choose a square on the board where they want to place their token, but they must first correctly complete the corresponding word formation question in order to do so. All of the words are based on the same root word.
If a student answers incorrectly, you could either have the opponent steal the square by answering correctly, or say that the square is now dead and nobody can place a token there.
As a follow-up you could set your students the task of coming up with their own lists of nine sentences to use in future games. You could give them each a root word (use, communicate, etc.) and send them to the Longman Online Dictionary to look up all the derivatives in order to make their 9 questions: https://www.ldoceonline.com/
This is a lesson plan designed to help Spanish speaking students sound more natural in lots of common, everyday interactions. Download the handout and PowerPoint below:
Students do some contrastive analysis of some high frequency expressions in English and Spanish in order to identify some common errors and put the more natural English expressions into practice.
Everyday English: Contrastive Analysis
Contrastive Analysis
Work with a partner.
Complete the second column with direct translations or common mistakes that Spanish speakers make with these expressions.
Spanish
Direct Translation/Common Mistake
English Equivalent
¡Hasta ahora! ¡Igualmente! ¿Cuánto tiempo? ¿Qué tal? ¡Que vaya bien! ¡Que te lo pases bien! ¡Aquí lo tienes! No te escucho. ¿Qué pasa? No pasa nada ¿Puedes repetir? ¿Cuánto falta para…? Estoy de acuerdo Una cosa/una pregunta
Now complete the third column with the more natural English equivalent.
Buzzer Game
Cut out the situation cards below. Put the cards face down in a pile. Turn over one card, the first person to say the appropriate expression for that card takes the card and scores one point. Keep playing until all the cards have been used.
Your housemate is going to the shop, they will be back in 5 minutes. What do you say to them?
Your co-worker says “have a good weekend!” as they leave the office. What do you say to them?
Your partner is leaving to go to an important job interview. What do you say to them?
You work in a coffee shop. You hand a customer their cup of coffee. What do you say to them?
You put your hand up in English class, you want to ask the teacher a question. What do you say to them?
You see an old friend from school you haven’t seen for a long time. What do you say to them?
You’re speaking on the phone but there is loud music playing. You don’t understand what they’re saying because of the noise. What do you say to them?
You get home and see that one of your children is crying. What do you say to them?
Your friend tells you that they’re going to Disneyland this weekend. What do you say to them?
Your friend says sorry for arriving late to meet you for lunch. You don’t mind that they’re late. What do you say to them?
Your teacher says something very quickly and you don’t understand. What do you say to them?
You’re having a debate at work and you have the same opinion as your co-worker. What do you say to them?
You see your friend in the morning and you want to know how they are. What do you say to them?
You’re bored at school and you want to know when you will be allowed to go to the playground. What do you say to the teacher?
Key
Spanish
Direct Translation/Common Mistake
English Equivalent
¡Hasta ahora! ¡Igualmente! ¿Cuánto tiempo? ¿Qué tal? ¡Que vaya bien! ¡Que te lo pases bien! ¡Aquí lo tienes! No te escucho. ¿Qué pasa? No pasa nada ¿Puedes repetir? ¿Cuánto falta para…? Estoy de acuerdo Una cosa/una pregunta
Until now!/See you now! Equally! How much time? What such? That it go well. That you pass it well. Here you have. I don’t listen you. What happens? Happens nothing Can you repeat? How much is left for…? I am agree One thing/one question
See you in a bit/sec Same to you! Long time, no see! How’s it going? Hope it goes well. Have fun! Here you go/Here’s…. I can’t hear you. What’s up? What’s wrong? No worries/problem. Sorry, I didn’t catch that. How much longer until…? I agree. I have a question/doubt
Buzzer Game
Your housemate is going to the shop, they will be back in 5 minutes. What do you say to them? See you in a bit/sec
Your co-worker says “have a good weekend!” as they leave the office. What do you say to them? You too!
Your partner is leaving to go to an important job interview. What do you say to them? Hope it goes well
You work in a coffee shop. You hand a customer their cup of coffee. What do you say to them? Here you go/Here’s your coffee
You put your hand up in English class, you want to ask the teacher a question. What do you say to them? I have a question/doubt
You see an old friend from school you haven’t seen for a long time. What do you say to them? Long time, no see!
You’re speaking on the phone but there is loud music playing. You don’t understand what they’re saying because of the noise. What do you say to them? I can’t hear you
You get home and see that one of your children is crying. What do you say to them? What’s wrong?
Your friend tells you that they’re going to Disneyland this weekend. What do you say to them? Have fun!
Your friend says sorry for arriving late to meet you for lunch. You don’t mind that they’re late. What do you say to them? No worries/problem
Your teacher says something very quickly and you don’t understand. What do you say to them? Sorry, I didn’t catch that
You’re having a debate at work and you have the same opinion as your co-worker. What do you say to them? I agree
You see your friend in the morning and you want to know how they are. What do you say to them? How’s it going?
You’re bored at school and you want to know when you will be allowed to go to the playground. What do you say to the teacher? How long / How much longer until play time?
The part 2 exercise is taken from the Expert Proficiency Coursebook published by Pearson.
Students first complete the exercise from their books, compare answers with a partner and correct the task in open class. The teacher then instructs them to close their books/fold the handout over and try to complete the second “inverted” version. In this version, different words have been removed from the fixed expressions tested in the original text. Other changes have been made in order to fully exploit the text for more high level lexis such as phrasal verbs and fixed expressions. Students can then refer back to the original in order to check their answers.
You can create your own inverted cloze exercises from any text in your course book. Happy inverting!
Inverted Version
Cover the original exercise.
Complete this version.
The relationship between the modern consumer and their rubbish is a complex one. Getting (1) ……. of rubbish has come to mean a great (2) ……. more than simply consigning breakfast leftovers (3) ……. a plastic bag. With the advent (4)……. recycling, rubbish has now invaded many people’s personal lives to an unprecedented (5) ……. There was a time, (6) ……. living memory, when rubbish collection was a simple matter – but today’s household rubbish, before being (7) ……., has to be filed and sorted (8) ……. colour-coded containers (9) ……. to its recycling category.
What is (10) ……., we are brought (11) ……. in a rash of irritation by the suggestion that, if rubbish collections were to become more infrequent, people would then make the effort to (12) ……. down on shopping and recycle more. We might be excused for wondering (13) ……. this would be possible. Can people realistically buy fewer eggs or (14) ……. of toothpaste than their lives require?
Recycling is supposed to be good for us. But for some, it’s just a (15) ……. of rubbish.
Read the text below and answer the following questions:
Why You Procrastinate (It Has Nothing to Do With Self-Control)
By Charlotte Lieberman
If you’ve ever put off an important task by, say, alphabetizing your spice drawer, you know it wouldn’t be fair to describe yourself as lazy. After all, alphabetizing requires focus and effort — and hey, maybe you even went the extra mile to wipe down each bottle before putting it back. And it’s not like you’re hanging out with friends or watching Netflix. You’re cleaning — something your parents would be proud of! This isn’t laziness or bad time management. This is procrastination.
When we procrastinate, we’re not only aware that we’re avoiding the task in question, but also that doing so is probably going to have a detrimental effect on our morale. And yet, we do it anyway.
“This is why we say that procrastination is essentially irrational,” said Dr. Fuschia Sirois, professor of psychology at the University of Sheffield. “It doesn’t make sense to do something you know is going to have negative consequences.” She added: “People engage in this pointless cycle of chronic procrastination because of an inability to manage negative moods associated with a task.”
The particular nature of our aversion depends on the given task or situation. It may be due to something inherently unpleasant about the task itself — having to clean a dirty bathroom or organizing a long, boring spreadsheet for your boss. But it might also stem from deeper feelings related to the task, such as self-doubt, low self-esteem, anxiety or insecurity. Staring at a blank document, you might be thinking, I’m not smart enough to write this. Even if I am, what will people think of it? What if I do a bad job?
There’s an entire body of research dedicated to the ruminative, self-blaming thoughts many of us tend to have in the wake of procrastination, which are known as “procrastinatory cognitions.” According to Dr. Sirois, the thoughts we have about procrastination typically exacerbate our distress and stress, which contribute to further procrastination.
Although procrastination offers momentary relief, Dr. Sirois argues that it is what makes the cycle especially vicious. In the immediate present, shelving a task provides relief — “you’ve been rewarded for procrastinating,” Dr. Sirois said. This is precisely why procrastination tends not to be a one-off behavior, but a cycle, one that easily becomes a chronic habit. Over time, chronic procrastination has not only productivity costs, but measurably destructive effects on our mental and physical health, including chronic stress, general psychological distress and low life satisfaction, symptoms of depression and anxiety, unhealthy behavior, chronic illness and even hypertension and cardiovascular disease.
If it seems ironic that we procrastinate to avoid negative feelings, but end up feeling even worse, that’s because it is. And once again, we have evolution to thank. Procrastination is a perfect example of present bias, our hard-wired tendency to prioritize short-term needs ahead of long-term ones.
“We really weren’t designed to think ahead into the further future because we needed to focus on providing for ourselves in the here and now,” said psychologist Dr. Hal Hershfield, a professor of marketing at the U.C.L.A. Anderson School of Management.
His research has shown that, on a neural level, we perceive our “future selves” more like strangers than as parts of ourselves. When we procrastinate, parts of our brains actually think that the tasks we’re putting off — and the accompanying negative feelings that await us on the other side — are somebody else’s problem.
The human ability to procrastinate is deeply existential, as it raises questions about individual agency and how we want to spend our time as opposed to how we actually do. But it’s also a reminder of our commonality — we’re all vulnerable to painful feelings, and most of us just want to be happy with the choices we make. In the end, we have to find a better reward than avoidance — one that can relieve our challenging feelings in the present moment without causing harm to our future selves.
Questions:
In the first paragraph, the author thinks that procrastinating:
doesn’t include activities like cleaning and organizing, because they are productive.
involves focusing on very detailed tasks that require a lot of effort.
should not be equated to laziness.
consists of activities like watching Netflix and spending time with friends.
Why does the author say that procrastination is irrational?
We are not conscious of the fact that we are about to avoid a task.
We put off the task despite knowing it will affect us negatively.
People repeat the same behaviour for no reason.
Particular tasks evoke strong negative emotions.
According to the text, where does our reluctance to get on with tasks come from?
Deep negative feelings that were once associated with the task.
Some tasks are gruesome and we want to avoid them.
The dullness of some tasks makes us bored and unmotivated.
It is probably not contingent on one specific origin.
What does the article say about the vicious cycle of procrastination?
Procrastinating provides an immediate and prolonged sense of relief.
The behaviour only takes place once because it has negative consequences.
It is a consequence of the negative effects on our physical and mental health.
Putting off a task can reinforce the procrastinating behaviour.
What is the relationship between evolution and procrastination, according to Dr. Hershfield?
Brains have evolved to place current demands above future consequences.
Procrastination is a product of recent evolution.
It is ironic that we evolved to be procrastinators.
We evolved to avoid negative feelings that may arise in the future.
What is the neural justification for procrastination, according to Dr. Hershfield’s research?
We avoid thinking about the future, even if it affects us in the present.
Putting off a task provides relief from stress and anxiety.
Our brains assign the responsibility for the task to a different entity.
The pursuit of happiness is the most important goal for our brains.
My C2 proficiency students have just taken a full mock exam and one of the issues their writings had in common was the lack of “hooks” in their articles and reviews to draw the reader in an encourage them to keep reading. So, I put together this lesson plan, based heavily on this great article by Suzanne Davis.
The final task I set my students is on the topic of fame, so you might want to use my “The Life of a Celeb” vocabulary lesson before setting it. Download the handout below:
Have students read the opening paragraphs by Gary Provost to each other out loud and ask them to reflect on the message. Encourage them to attempt a similar range of sentence lengths in their own articles.
Have students refer to the 7 steps to success while writing their article for homework.
Lead students through the different types of hook and field questions.
Draw students’ attention to the need to use an engaging title.
Have students read the writing task and underline the content points. Then put them in pairs and have them discuss which hook would work best for this particular task. Then have them choose an expression about fame for their title.
Some possible answers could be:
Story hook: Imagine the scene, you just want to nip to the shops for a pint of milk but no sooner have you stepped out the door than a mob of paparazzi are hassling you. The constant click, click, click of the shutters, the blinding flashes fill your eyes, it’s enough to make you question if it’s all worth it.
Metaphor hook: Fame is, undoubtedly, a double-edged sword; while it bestows upon you all the riches your heart could desire, it slices away such basic comforts as privacy and anonymity.
Quotation hook: As Clive James once said “a life without fame can be a good life, but fame without a life is no life at all”
Writing Part 2 – 7 Steps to Success
Read the task, underline content points.
Organise content points into paragraphs.
WHAT are you going to say? Add notes to paragraphs. STAY ON TOPIC!
HOW are you going to say it?
Register? Formal/informal?
Range of structures: What impressive grammar are you going to use?
Inversions (not only/no sooner/not until/seldom)
Inverted conditionals (Were I to…./Had they known…)
Cleft sentences (What impressed me most was…)
Participle clauses (Having visited the city before, I know what to expect. Being a massive fan of cheese, I had a whale of a time in France)
Double comparatives (The more cheese I ate, the fatter I became. The more I studied the more I understood about French culture.)
Range of vocabulary:
Phrasal verbs. (switch over, zone out, sit back)
Idioms/similes (like watching paint dry/to be on the edge of one’s seat)
Relevant vocabulary to the topic (chat show, current affairs, couch potato, remote control)
Other expressions (Something for everyone, a smorgasbord of options, kill time, etc.)
Forms and conventions: Report/proposal – paragraph titles, letter conventions.
Write!
Check
Repetition
Spelling
Punctuation
An Article “Hook”
Capture the reader’s attention with your introduction, draw them in and make them want to read more.
The Story Hook
Throw the reader straight into a narrative or story related to the topic. The story should be in the 1st person, be descriptive and intriguing:
I got off the train and pulled my luggage behind me. A cab pulled up to the curb, and the driver got out. He lifted my luggage and said, “Miss, I’m just going to put your stuff in the boot.” I didn’t know what he meant until I saw him open the car’s trunk. Then I realized the boot means car trunk. I got in the cab, wondering how many other words would be different in England.
Start in the middle of the most exciting part, then go back later:
“Boom, boom, boom,” The sound of my heart beating faster and faster echoed in my ears. How on earth had I got myself into this situation? You might ask. Twenty feet underwater with nothing but a thin metal cage between me and perhaps the most terrifying apex predator on the planet, the great white shark….
Well, it had all started two weeks previously when….
The Descriptive Hook
Similar to the story hook but focus more on describing one moment/thing in great detail. Leave the reader wanting to know more about it.
The dog howled in pain and limped along the side of the road. His leg was cut and blood streamed down his leg.
Doesn’t this scene make you curious about what will happen to the dog?
The leather strap of the ancient watch was creased and faded from long years in the sunlight. Down the glass of the face ran a long, roughly vertical crack, recalling the blunt impact which had stopped the hands of the timepiece dead all those years ago.
Don’t you want to hear the story of the watch?
The Metaphor/Simile Hook
The metaphor/simile hook engages your readers because it makes them think about a topic in a different way.
A metaphor is a figure of speech that directly compares one thing to another, but these two things seem unrelated. An example of a metaphor is: Her boyfriend is a rat.
The boyfriend is not really a rat, but he behaves like one.
A simile is like a metaphor. Both compare two unrelated things to each other, but a simile uses the words like or as to connect them. For example: Writing a research paper is like running a marathon when it’s 95 degrees Fahrenheit.
If your article topic is on business blogging you could write the metaphor hook:
A business blog is a magnet pulling clients to a company.
Or the simile hook:
A business blog is like a magnet that pulls clients to a company.
Metaphor hooks: Marriage is a journey, with its ups and downs. They say that silence is golden. Laughter is the best medicine.
Simile hooks: Love is like a fine wine, it matures with age. My grandmother has always been as tough as an old boot. The dress fit her like a glove, there was no denying it
The Quotation Hook
This is a hook where you begin your article with a quotation. The quotation could be from a famous person, but it doesn’t have to be. You can quote anyone if it connects to what you’re writing about.
If you are writing about the topic of education you could begin with: Nelson Mandela said, “Education is the most powerful weapon you can use to change the world.”
If you want to use a quotation for a hook, make sure you quote the words exactly. Choose quotations where the words are striking, powerful, and/ or memorable.
Famous quotes:
“The journey of a thousand miles begins with one step.” – Lao Tzu
“That which does not kill us makes us stronger.” – Friedrich Nietzsche
“Life is what happens when you’re busy making other plans.” – John Lennon
“When the going gets tough, the tough get going.” – Joe Kennedy
“You must be the change you wish to see in the world.” – Mahatma Gandhi
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” – Mae West
“You miss 100 percent of the shots you never take.” – Wayne Gretzky
“Strive not to be a success, but rather to be of value.” – Albert Einstein
“Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you’re going to get.” – Forrest Gump
Article Titles – Keep it Catchy
Most proficiency articles require a catchy title, try to include:
An expression/idiom/proverb:
Taking the rough with the smooth
Life in the limelight
Coming face-to-face with a man-eater!
The long arm of the law
Task
You recently read an article from an online youth magazine on the pressures of fame for young celebrities. The magazine has invited readers to respond to the topic with a short article of their own, which answers the following questions…
Is becoming famous worth it?
Do male and female celebrities experience the same pressures?
What can be done to shield young celebrities from the drawbacks of fame?